Sunday, April 11, 2010

chrysanthemum shrine, said Princess Haiku

chrysanthemum shrine
offerings- a poet’s gold
this flower a dream

Diane Dehler


Writerman242 said...

a brave poet only would use chrysanthemum..or do I just mean it's a hard word for me to say? Nice little piece Diane. I like 'this flower a dream', kind of balances shrine in the first line.

Princess Haiku said...

Thanks Writerman. I know what you mean about "chrysanthemum" though. It's a challenging flower to be in love with.

A.Decker said...

Lovely pic, and verse.

Is this one of yours, that you planted--I forget how long ago--last year? Beautiful.

And by the way, I wouldn't blame you for just going with "mums"...